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'|nadequate'(moving mindlessly 2)

By trustjab

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It would be such a mess If this disease actually progressed it might wind up in someones chest Fuckin things up, tryin' it's best I feel like a new man It is inadequate if you can Try to feel me and tell me my friend Is it everything you hoped it would be Is it not a tradgedy To see such inadequacy To look upon such fright And see the murder of a bloody night I do not understand So I intiate a plan Holding back everything I can So tell me my friend Do you feel like a new man You are inadequate such a mess Can you feel the heart pump in your chest Does it burn, does it ahce, watch it explode That is how you make me feel Woman, unbound this load That has been carried upon me and bestowed Feel the pressure rise Peers peering into eiry eyes People watching you from behind Clawing at your back until you turn around And you think you are insane when no body was found At the murder site I switched bodies I made the wrong choice and switched lanes On the freeway I had a thought that made me change It was inadequate yet it still made sense Steady searching in the nightly stocks Homies shootin up they glocks Life is full of these bonds Inadequate noises from the grave and beyondPart 2 and you thought I was done, no, like I told you I can't be stopped. Written December 20th, 2001 © on Dec 20 2001 08:13 AM PST   20 • 0 • 1

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