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'ádvise me'

By trustjab

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If you wish upon the right star then you might say the chances are but then again if you don't wish then what are you serving in your dish? What rules follow the preceding advise me before I slip up once again it could mean my life or my next of kin in a galaxy full of light i struggle with this fight there is one thing I will say on life we are livin let it flow cuz it won't stop and when the kind consciousness come unto you you will know cuz it won't stop when I wipe the sleep from my eyes I wonder and lerk on why you have chosen me to lead this whole army of losers and lamers like I advise me as to what I am to do next I seem lost without a word when I wipe the sleep from my eyes will my fondest dream please come true crush my heart with a hammer make a purer one Babylon the leader of this whole army the refugees and escapees ruin me down to the dust I go crush me with your foot cus I won't drop dead right away advise me one more time as to why I am living let me go let it flow I won't stop for the world the world won't stop for me so let me keep on going I have to keep on flowing let my mind sink further and further release the feeling of your pride of your pride it won't stop advise me why Written November 6th, 2001 © on Nov 06 2001 06:04 AM PST   0 • 8

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